Palazzo Capulet
45 Via Figliapersa
West Verona, IT 10001
Casa Montague
2333 Via Rubicuore
East Verona, IT 20002
July 09, 2008
Dear Sir,
I have witnessed a fencing battle between Romeo and one of the Capulet's. The outcome was very appalling. Romeo's great friend, Mercutio, and Juliet's cousin, Tybalt, both died during the fight. I believe the behavior of these people is outrageous and it is in your responsibility that this happened for teaching them such behavior.
I believe better parenting would help improve their behavior. Your sons should be as good "as the mafter of the shippe( masters of the ship)". It is important to that you train your son to be good Christians so they won't be as bad as they grow up. They can also grow up and teach his wife and children to be good Christians. What set them off was the lust for Juliet. As you may have known, women cast "dark magical spells" onto guys that would make them go crazy for them. Also bad behavior may occur such as the incident with the Capulet's and Mercutio's.
The behavior of each of your sons is not acceptable. Mercutio should not joke around when he is outside with the presents of other people. Yet he should not make fun of others. Tybalt's behavior is being too serious and started a fight with Mercutio. It is reasonable that Romeo wanted to avenge Mercutio's death but there are more better ways to deal with this.
In conclusion, it is important that you raise your children to be well behaved. With good manners, such conflicts wouldn't happen. I believe that you wouldn't want to see such problems happens on the streets. We want to keep it nice and safe for others.
Sincerly, Phong Tran
1234 Fake Street
San Diego, CA 98765
Wednesday, July 9, 2008
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Casa Montague
2333 Via Rubicuore
East Verona, IT 20002
July 09, 2008
Dear Sir,
I have witnessed a fence[ing] battle between Romeo and one of the Capulet's. The outcome was very appalling. Romeo's great friend, Mercutio, and Juliet's cousin, Tybalt, both died during the fight. Mercutio was killed by the sword of Tybalt and he [unclear] was killed by Romeo's [sword?]. I believe the behavior of these people is outrageous and it is in your responsibility that this happened for teaching them such behavior.[unclear please rewrite to explain]
I believe better parenting would help improve their behavior. Your sons should be as good "as the mafter of the shippe( masters of the ship)". It is important to that you train your son to be good Christians so they won't be as bad as they grow up. They can also grow up and teach his wife and children to be good Christians. What set them off was the lust for Juliet. As you may have known, women cast "dark magical spells" onto guys that would make them go crazy for them. Also bad behavior may occur such as the incident with the Capulet's and Mercutio's.
The behavior of each of your sons is not acceptable. Mercutio should not joke around when he is outside with the presents of other people. Yet he should not make fun of others. Tybalt's behavior is being too serious and started a fight with Mercutio. It is reasonable that Romeo wanted to avenge Mercutio's death but there are more better ways to deal with this.
In conclusion, it is important that you raise your children to be well behaved. With good manners, such conflicts wouldn't happen. Soooooooooooo,[not appropriate for a letter] Start being a Parent!
Sincerly[sp?], Phong Tran
1234 Fake Street
San Diego, CA 98765
Phong,
Well done. Save for some pelling errors and a mission couple of citations, this is very good. The grade for this is 4/5. If you make the aforementioned corrections your grade will be 5/5.
Thanks
T
fixed
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